Three Meals a Day in My Family

Hello， everyone！My name is Tom. Let me introduce my family’ s three meals a day.

For breakfast， I like bread very much. I think it is very healthy. And my parents like salad. They think it’s good for their health. For lunch， I like noodles， and I also eat an apple after lunch. I think apples are very delicious. My mom likes noodles， and my dad likes hamburgers. For dinner， I like strawberries and chicken， because I think they can replenish my nutrition. Besides， I think bananas are awful， so I don’t like them. What’s more， my mother likes milk and oranges very much. However， she doesn’t like hamburgers. She thinks hamburgers make her fat. My father likes carrots and eggs very much， but he doesn’t like chicken. I don’t know why.

This is my family’s diet. Do you think the food we eat is healthy What about yours

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这篇作文属于应用文，主题明确，层次清晰。第一段引出主题，第二段介绍了自己和家人的饮食习惯，第三段总结全文，提出反问。语意流畅，运用and、besides、however等连接词，增强了文章的连贯性。