The Person Who Impressed Me Most

How time flies！ I’m a little sad when I realize that I will graduate from junior high school in a few months. Luckily， I have some wonderful memories.

The person who impressed me most was my friend. My English was bad before and I felt unhappy about it. So I told it to a girl called Mary， who was good at English. She was willing to help me and made friends with me. She taught me some useful ways to learn English. We always communicated with each other in English. With her help， I have made great progress.

I will never forget her because she is the person who impressed me most. I gained not only the knowledge， but also the friendship from her.

河南农业大学附属中学

指导老师 郭蒙蒙

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文章描写了朋友对“我”的帮助，以及“我”最终收获了知识和友谊，这些都成为“我”初中生活的美好回忆。第二段中，作者熟练运用了定语从句“The person who impressed me most was my friend”，运用be willing to句式表达了朋友乐于助人的品质。