规则意识

题目预测

无规矩不成方圆。遵守规则，方显和谐。初中三年的校园生活，遵守规则的你一定有不少成长和变化。请以“School Rules Make Me Better”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述规则给你带来的变化和成长。

要点：（1）你的学校有哪些校规；（2）遵守校规给你带来了哪些方面的变化和成长；（3）向你的同学们发出倡议，呼吁大家遵守校规。

要求：（1）文中不要出现真实校名和师生姓名；（2）词数 100 左右。

技法点拨

1. 审主题、审文体。主题内容是描写校园规则给自己带来的成长变化。初中阶段有不少校规，在描述时注意条理清晰。文体为说明文或议论文。

2. 审要点。写作内容需要涵盖题目中的三个要点，即学校有哪些校规，这些校规给你带来了哪些方面的成长，倡议同学们遵守校规。要点要全面，可以适当增加细节，使文章内容更丰富。

3. 审时态、审人称。根据要点，文章应以第一人称为主。介绍校规时，应使用一般现在时；描述校规对自己成长的正面影响时，可使用一般现在时或现在完成时；发出倡议时， 可使用一般现在时或根据情况使用一般将来时。

学生范文

School Rules Make Me Better

It is widely believed that nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.（开篇用主语从句引出话题， 主题明确。）As students， we have to obey our school rules consciously for the purpose of self-improvement.

Our school rules which I followed every day during the past three years have made me better than before.（巧用“which”引导的定语从句和比较级，来说明遵守校规让“我”得到成长。）

First， I have to read English in a loud voice in order to master the words and grammar well. Second， we are not allowed to cut in line or talk loudly during the lunchtime. What’s more， we have to do our homework carefully and hand in it on time.

Following these rules not only helps me develop good learning habits but also enables me to study more efficiently.（以动名词短语作主语，以“not only...but also...”表并列，是本文的一大亮点。） Last but not least， I realize the importance of self-discipline. I hope every student can become better by following school rules.

点 评

文章要点齐全，条理非常清晰，好词好句颇多，如“accomplished” “consciously”“self-improvement” “efficiently”等，可见作者扎实的语言功底；句式灵活多样，使用了主语从句、定语从句、动名词短语作主语；“first” “second” “what’s more”“last but not least”等表层次的词语的使用，使文章显得脉络清晰、流畅自然。

School Rules Make Me Better

As we all know， each school has its specific school rules. Our school rules which make me a better person are as follows.（“which”引导的定语从句修饰“rules”，既点题又承上启下，自然引出下文。）

First， we can’t arrive late for class， and can’t talk loudly in class. Second， we have to keep our classroom clean.What’s more， we must read books when we’re waiting at the dining room. These rules make it possible for me to be more independent and get better grades than before.（“make it possible for sb. to do sth.”意为“使做某事对于某人来说成为可能”，表达准确贴切。）

As the saying goes， if people don’t make the rules， our society will be in chaos. If there are no rules restrict students’behavior， our school will be in a mess. Although some school rules are very strict， it’s necessary for students to follow them. Thus， I think all of us should obey the school rules. Only in this way can we achieve our goals and make great progress as well.（ 此处是向同学们发出倡议， 呼吁同学们遵守校规。结尾句运用“only+ 状语或状语从句放句首，句子半倒装”的结构，再次加强语气，升华主旨。）

点 评

文章结构清晰：第一段开篇点题，引出下文；第二段描述校规及其给自己带来的成长；最后一段发出倡议。要点齐全，衔接流畅。在表达方面，描述规则时运用了“We can’t... ”“We have to...” “We must...” “It’s necessary for us to do...”的句型。在论证规则合理性时运用了“as the saying goes”、“ if ”引导的条件从句、“although”引导的让步状语从句，收尾时运用了倒装句，在行文时运用了“first”“second”“what’s more”“thus”等逻辑连接词。写作技巧娴熟，值得肯定。

（选自《中考英语热点作文冲刺》，文心出版社，2023年8月第1版，有改动）