高恩博：My Saturday

I had a great Saturday last week. I got up at eight in the morning. After breakfast， I did my homework. And then I went to my grandmas house to have lunch. In the afternoon， I went to swim with my friends. We had a good time together. In the evening， I watched TV with my parents. I was happy to spend my Saturday with my family and friends. What a great day！

五（2）班 高恩博

指导老师点评：

小作者們都很有想法，从不同角度描述了自己周六的活动：史辰睿着重介绍自己周六在博物馆的经历，充分体验科学的乐趣；张语桐选取自己周六的主要活动，表达自己对绘画的热爱；王沐祺则按照时间顺序记录周六的活动，结构严谨，条理清晰。这三位同学都用到了often、usually等频率副词。高恩博则另辟蹊径，选用过去时，从早、中、晚三个时间段介绍了自己上周六的日程。