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2023-10-07

疯狂英语·新策略 2023年8期
关键词:书面说明文范文

●同源高考

一位古巴教师的中国文化情缘

Reading Check

1~4 BBDC

世纪之信

Reading Check

1~4 BCAD

帮助贫困儿童阅读的天使

Reading Check

1~4 CABD

中国科学家发现“嫦娥石”

Reading Check

1~4 CCBB

●巧读妙写

事理阐释类说明文读写指南

一、阅读自测

1~4 CDBC

三、句式仿写

1.Exercising

2.The good news is that

3.As long as teens do regular exercise and have good eating habits

四、写作实践

Keep a healthy weight

Currently more and more teenagers are becoming fat, which has been causing great concern.As for how to keep a healthy weight, I believe the keys is regular exercise and good eating habits.

Firstly, teens should get 60 minutes or more of physical activity a day.Teens can do various exercises like jogging,walking and climbing the stairs.Additionally, teens should have a balanced diet.Fruits and vegetables are strongly recommended because they are rich in vitamins and low in fat.

As long as teens do regular exercise and have good eating habits, they will keep a healthy weight.

●完美续写

跟着名著学续写之家庭教育

句式微练习

一、1.and my mother hugged me warmly,saying

2.and he gave a cry of pain

二、1.with a sentence saying“everything is possible”

2.With the happy memories brought back by the photos on the wall

三、1.was a large heap of coal

2.on which were written some words“To my greatest fan.”

四、1.Hearing her sincere appreciation

2.exhausted and relieved

五、1.My heart raced wildly

2.a blurred shape appeared in the darkness

情境微仿写

1.a great idea occurred to me: getting me delivered in a box to my sister's house

2.to my great amazement, their manager agreed to help me to fulfil my dream

3.I, hidden in the big box, heard the mailman ringing my sister's doorbell

4.When the box was opened and she saw me sitting inside smiling up at her

5.here it was a memory that both of us would cherish forever

语篇微演练

主题语境:信念如磐,成功脱险

➢续写点睛

本文中,莉齐和妹妹跟随爸爸妈妈出海钓鱼,遭遇沉船落水,爸爸留下莉齐照顾怀孕的妈妈和妹妹,自己去寻求救援。妈妈和妹妹因体力不支快失去意识,只有莉齐坚持并保护着她们,等待爸爸的归来。

段落续写:

根据续写第一段的首句内容“几个小时后,莉齐听到远处有人叫她的名字”可知,续写第一段须描写爸爸的归来,三人获救。

根据续写第二段的首句内容“在海岸上,一辆救护车正等着他们”可知,续写第二段可描写获救后莉齐与爸爸的对话,表达感想的同时点题:父女双方的爱的信念让家庭脱险。

➢参考范文

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After several hours,Lizzy heard her name called in the distance.“It's Dad,”Lizzy called out and began to shake her sleepy mother and sister.Mother opened her eyes and squeezed out a faint smile and fell asleep again.Through the thick fog, a white small boat slid close.Lizzy cried out,“Dad, here.”, with tears rolling down her face.Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved.She knew they were rescued.

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On the coast,an ambulance was waiting for them.With the help of the nurses,they all got in.Wrapped in a warm blanket,Lizzy sat beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed.Suddenly, Lizzy turned to her father and said,“I knew you would be back,Dad.”“I knew you would keep Mother and Sister safe.”Her father hugged her.Tears rolled down their faces.

➢范文解读

类型________________动作描写情绪描写句式表达语料_______________called out 大叫,began to shake 开始摇晃,cried out 大喊,closed 闭上,knew知道,got in 进入,sat 坐,turned to 转______向,hugged 拥抱faint 虚弱的,tears rolling down 流泪,exhausted 筋疲力尽的,relieved 如释______重负的1.Lizzy cried out,“Dad, here.”, with tears rolling down her face.(with的复合结构)2.Finally,Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved.(where引导定语从句和形容词作状语)3.Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sat beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed.(过去分词和现在分词作状语)4.Through the thick fog, a white small boat slid close.(无灵主语句式)5.Tears rolled down their faces.(无灵主__________________________________________语句式表达情绪)

写好结尾,续出精彩

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As the months went by,I began to realize that I actually wanted to walk Misty.Floating in the ocean of daily stress and depression, walking with Misty became the only way to escape.Finally, I managed to return to walk Misty,time permitting.Sometimes,I would talk about Joe with her or utter something others didn't care, even though she was unable to reply.When tears welled up and blurred my vision, I could feel her cheek leaning against my feet.Glancing at her sad brown eyes, I knew she could understand my feelings.Time flew by bitterly, but I enjoyed Misty's company.

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After Joe died in2009,Misty slept on his pillow.The warmth she spread would ease my sorrow every moment I missed Joe.Fortunately,each time I walked with Misty,it brought me to the past time when Joe,Becky and I wandered together in the park,laughing and singing around.Misty kept me company in her silent way.Gradually,life changed for the better but walking with Misty remained the same.

●学习妙测

主题一 灾害与防护

Ⅰ.阅读理解

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了难民营的作用、优势及相关问题。

1~4 CDBD

Ⅱ.补全信息

本文是一篇说明文。作者认为尽管要保护自己,但也要进行适当的积极冒险,尝试新事物,并给出了积极冒险的定义和措施。

1~5 BGDEF

Ⅲ.完形填空

本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要介绍了作者一家人在2017 年新年时去乌干达旅游,中途遭遇车祸意外受伤住院的经历和感受。

1~5 BDCCA 6~10 DBABA

11~15 BACDC

Ⅳ.语法填空

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了极端天气带来的影响及相关研究人员对此的看法。

1.and 2.thousands 3.worse

4.have been affected 5.scientist 6.the

7.to disappear 8.than 9.strongly

10.getting

V.书面表达

Protect ourselves from the disaster

Much less as misfortune occurs than fortune, it can cause great damage to us.Here are some suggestions provided for you.

First of all, we'd better watch TV and search the information from the Internet to acquire very full knowledge of how to protect ourselves from the natural disasters.Secondly,we should think carefully and decide to buy something for ourselves, which will be helpful when we are in danger.Thirdly, after having acquired some knowledge about how to protect ourselves, we should try to practice.When we practice very proficiently,we could protect our family in case of a disaster.

Only in this way can we learn how to protect ourselves from the natural disasters!

Ⅵ.读后续写

Paragraph 1:

My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.He grabbed my hand and pulled me along with him.As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us.Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs.Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking.My father yelled at us to keep climbing.We stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us.It had stopped rising.After some minutes,it began to drop.

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We waited a long time before going downstairs.Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecognizable hotel gate.There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere.Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain.What we saw weakened our hearts and we decided to help the victims after a narrow escape.Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before.The special trip to Penang was deeply impressed in my mind.

主题二 世界的语言

Ⅰ.阅读理解

本文是一篇说明文。一项新研究发现,狗在国外会遇到语言障碍,并介绍了研究开展的过程。

1~4 BCAD

Ⅱ.补全信息

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了在短期内快速掌握一门语言的几种方法。

1~5 FGBCA

Ⅲ.完形填空

本文是一篇记叙文。作者8 岁时搬到澳大利亚,遭遇跨文化问题后,通过参加辩论队走出了困境,改变了人生,同时对人生也有了丰富的感悟。

1~5 BADCA 6~10 CDBAD

11~15 BCADC

Ⅳ.语法填空

本文是一篇说明文。文章主要讲述了音乐家Astrid Poghosyan 热爱中国语言和文化,并为自己取了中文名字“马星星”的故事。

1.herself 2.is inspired 3.which

4.extremely 5.experienced 6.a

7.including 8.to 9.have been

10.convenience

Ⅴ.书面表达

Dear schoolmates,

It's my great honor to make a concluding statement here.At this moment,I'd like to extend my sincere congratulations to all of the participants.

The competition would not be a great success without the joint efforts of everyone.My hearty thanks go firstly to our teachers, whose guidance and encouragement have given us much insight into translation of Chinese poetry.Besides, all the participants' devotion and wonderful performance impressed us a lot.Most importantly,the competition has further stimulated our passion for Chinese poetry and boosted our cultural confidence.

I sincerely hope that we students will work to learn English well, carry forward and spread traditional Chinese culture.

That's all.Thank you!

Ⅵ.读后续写

Paragraph 1:

Aware that there was something wrongwith Magen,Mom knocked on the door and entered her room.“Where's your spelling test paper, sweetheart?”Mom asked, gazing at her eagerly.Magen took out the paper and handed it unwillingly to her mom.When Mom spotted “honesly”, Mom frowned,“Probably you don't deserve the prize.”After thinking for a while, Magen soon understood what she should do.Paragraph 2:

The next day,arriving early at school,Magen pushed open the door of Ms Mc-Cormack's office.Hands slightly trembling,Magen gave Ms McCormack her test paper and the dictionary.Magen confessed her spelling mistake in the test, a pink flush spreading over her cheeks.“I see.”Even though Ms McCormack tried to contain her emotions, surprise registered on her face.Then she picked up a pen, crossed out the word“perfect”and wrote“honest”before handing the prize back to Magen.Magen's jaw dropped.Ms McCormack grinned.“For your honesty.”

主题三 文化遗产

Ⅰ.阅读理解

本文是一篇说明文。良渚遗址,五千年前的中华文明,已经被列入联合国教科文组织世界遗产名录。

1~3 BDC

Ⅱ.补全信息

本文是一篇说明文,主要讲述了中国的点茶文化。

1~5 BDEAG

Ⅲ.完形填空

本文是一篇记叙文。作者一家人每年为了准备元旦,都会举办烘焙日,尤其是做L 形面条,这对他们家来说是一个非常重要的传统。

1~5 CBCDB 6~10 ADADC

11~15 BCADA

Ⅳ.语法填空

本文是一篇记叙文,主要介绍了武夷竹编非遗艺术传承人谢宏星。

1.natural 2.out 3.combining

4.recognized 5.which 6.products

7.have been replaced 8.it 9.hardship

10.to exchange

Ⅴ.书面表达

Dear Jack,

I am very delighted to know that you are planning on a programApproachingChina, which aims at introducing traditional Chinese art.I am writing to give you some advice on it.

From my perspective,introducing Chinese calligraphy is a good choice.First and foremost, Chinese calligraphy is a unique art with beautiful images of Chinese characters.It is a representative of Chinese art.Besides, Chinese culture is extensive and profound, and it starts from the creation of Chinese characters, which is best reflected in various styles of calligraphy.Last but not least, Chinese culture is embedded in the spirit of calligraphy.By introducing calligraphy, you will open up the opportunity for your schoolmates and friends to learn more about Chinese culture.

I hope these suggestions will be beneficial to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Ⅵ.读后续写

Paragraph 1:

As I sat down on the bench,I pressed a key on the piano and was surprised to hear no sound.Feeling as if the whole world was watching me, I was struck dead with embarrassment.How could I perform the song without the piano? I was on pins and needles when Phyllis slowly made her way to the front of the crowd and announced in a comforting tone,“This girl has come to sing for us but the piano seems to be a little nervous.”Almost immediately, there was scattered applause and several people stepped forward to help me plug in the piano and set the microphone.With everything ready, I took a deep breath and commenced my performance.Paragraph 2:

Nervousness melted away and I started to enjoy the performance with the old.One woman got up and began to animatedly dance around the room.Some of the people swayed in their chairs to the beat of the music while others stamped their feet.The performance ended up with a storm of applause from the crowd.I realized that it was far better than a piano recital because almost everyone seemed to truly appreciate my music and I was proud that I had the power to spread kindness to them.It ended up being a blessing in disguise that the recital was canceled, leading to me sharing the gift of music with those who needed it most.

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