如何写好建议信

山东 李全忠

❖情境呈现

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lily最近因肥胖问题而感到烦恼，发来邮件向你咨询如何才能控制体重并保持健康。请你给她回一封邮件，提出相关建议。注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Lily,

Yours,

Li Hua

【佳作赏析】

Dear Lily,

I'm sorry to hear that you're depressed because of your weight.Here are my tips for you.

Above all,I suggest you do more sports,such as running,swimming,playing basketball and so on.Besides,drinking enough water is also a good way to help you lose weight.Finally,if I were you,I would keep a healthy diet.Not only should you eat on time,but also you should eat less meat and more vegetables.

Best wishes to you!I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

❖写作指导

一、文体概述

建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决相关问题的信件。写建议信时，要注意观点合理，礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充分，具备合理性和说服力。建议信主要包括：

1.说明写信目的；

2.提出建议与改进措施；

3.希望对方采纳建议并表达自己的祝愿。

二、谋篇布局

三、常用语块

ought to 应该

give/offer sb some advice 给某人一些建议

as follows 如下

have difficulty/trouble（in）doing sth 做 某事有困难

make use of 利用

ask sb for advice 向某人征求意见

make a plan 制订计划

find...helpful/useful 认为……有用

take...into account/consideration 把……考虑在内

get improved 得到改善

change for the better 有所改善

in my opinion/from my point of view 在我看来

carry out your plan step by step 一步步实施你的计划

have/hold a positive attitude towards/to对……持有积极的态度

go out for a walk 去散步

be beneficial to 对……有益

communicate with 与……沟通

四、常用句式

●Paragraph 1 阐明写信目的

1.I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to develop good learning habits.很高兴收到你的来信，信中你询问我关于如何养成良好的学习习惯的建议。

2.Concerning your request,I would like to offer my advice on how to keep fit.对于你的请求，我想就如何保持健康提出我的建议。

3.My suggestions are as follows.以下是我的建议。

●Paragraph 2 提出建议

1.It is necessary for you to have a healthy diet.拥有健康的饮食对你来说很有必要。

2.The best way to improve your Chinese is to read many easy Chinese books.提升你的中文的最佳途径就是去阅读许多浅显易懂的中文书籍。

3.There are many beautiful and colorful pictures,which can help us understand Chinese better.有许多好看的、色彩多样的图片可以帮助我们更好地理解中文。

4.These books have many advantages.One of them is that we can find a variety of topics from the books,such as science,culture and history.这些书有许多优点，其中之一就是我们可以从中找到各种各样的话题，比如科学、文化和历史。

5.You'd better take part in after class activities as much as possible,which will not only make your school life colorful,but also improve your learning.你最好尽可能多地参加课外活动，这不但会使你的校园生活变得丰富多彩，还能提升你的学习水平。

6.If I were you,I would try learning and singing Chinese songs.如果我是你，我会尝试学习唱中文歌曲。

7.Eating less meat and more vegetables is also a good idea.少吃肉、多吃蔬菜也是一个不错的主意。

8.Drinking enough water is also a good way to help you lose weight.喝足够的水也是一个帮助你减肥的好办法。

●Paragraph 3 表达祝愿

1.I hope you'll find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations useful.我希望你会觉得这些建议有用。

2.I hope that my suggestions will be of some value.我希望我的建议将会有价值。

3.I do hope to hear good news from you.我希望能听到你的好消息。

五、常用衔接词

firstly

first of all

above all

to begin with

in the first place

for one thing

secondly

besides

moreover

in addition

what's more

furthermore

worse still

to make matters worse

for another thing

finally

at last

in the end

last but not least

❖即时强训

Task 1

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文，请给他回一封邮件，给出你的建议。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

Yours,

Li Hua

Task 2

假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Mike 最近感觉学习压力很大，写信向你求助。请你用英文给他回一封信，就如何处理压力给他一些建议。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mike,

Yours,

Li Hua