2021年高考文体写作系列4：求职信

2020-11-02江苏盐城射阳县陈洋中学温从秀

疯狂英语·新策略 2020年10期

江苏盐城射阳县陈洋中学温从秀

素养解读

求职信是写信人就某一职位向收信人提出请求的信件。它通常包括三部分内容：1.阐述招聘信息的来源与所申请的职位；2.简述个人信息；3.强调自己的能力并请求给予面试机会。求职信的语言属于正式用语，要用词简洁、准确，语气礼貌、自信，所给信息要具有可信度。

素材金库

一、常用词块

1.主修……专业major in...

2.（可）胜任…… be qualified for...

3.精通……/对……掌握熟练have a good command/knowledge of...

4.申请 apply for

5.与……相处融洽get along well with...

6.对……乐观 be optimistic about...

7.和谐的人际关系a harmonious interpersonal relationship

8.满足你们的资历要求meet your qualifications

9.在……方面有丰富的经验have rich experience in.../be experienced in...

10.在你方便的时候进行面谈have a personal interview at your convenience

11.开阔眼界 broaden one's vision/horizons

12.责任感/成就感 a sense of responsibility/achievement

二、常用句式

1.从你们的广告中我得知你们正在招聘一名……

I learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a(n)...

2.如果你们能够给我提供这样的机会，我将十分感激。

I would really appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.

3.一旦被录用，我将竭尽所能把工作做好。

Once hired,I will devote myself to the post.

4.我盼望着你尽快回复。

I am looking forward to your earliest reply.

5.用电话或电子邮件联系我。

I can be reached by telephone/email.

三、写作模板

Dear_______,

I have just read in the newspaper that_______.①I am therefore writing to be_______.2○

I am _______.③My name is _______and I am studying _______.④I can _______.⑤As for a second language,I can _______.I have some working experience as _______.⑥ I am sure I'll_______.⑦

You can _______.8○I can visit your office at any time for a talk or an interview.

Best wishes.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ping

①写信背景

②交代写信目的

③～④自我介绍

⑤～⑦介绍个人优势

⑧表达期待

考题回放

假定你叫李华，你校外籍教师Angel暑假期间准备在本市开一家西餐店，要招聘若干名暑期兼职人员。请根据右图，给Angel写一份求职申请信，申请该工作。

Wanted!

4 middle school students

Do service work and act as a translator

Healthy and helpful

Contact:wfpub@qmail.com

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：住宿accommodation

Dear Angel,

I happened to have read your advertisement and have decided to apply for the job.

I am looking forward to your early reply!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

写作指导

本篇书面表达从命题形式上来看，属于图文结合类的写作，要求考生根据所给的广告给西餐店写一封信，申请该工作。从文体上来看，属于应用文写作中的申请信写作。

内容分析：

文体书信体——求职申请信申请事宜写信目的个人简介期待回复个人发挥成为西餐店的暑期工I am writing to be...apply for the job/position,have a good command of English,be fluent in spoken English,be free during the summer vacation,offer me some valuable work experience,the opportunity to practise my spoken English,acting as a translator,making friends and communicating with foreigners I am looking forward to your early reply.适当增加相关细节

佳作赏析

Dear Angel,

I happened to have read your advertisement and have decided to apply for the job.

As a Senior 3 student,I have a good command of English and I am fluent in spoken English.I shall be free during the summer vacation.So I have decided to find something interesting to do and I think the job is the very thing I'd like to do.

The job will benefit me a lot.It'll offer me some valuable work experience as well as the opportunity to practise my spoken English by acting as a translator for you.Besides,I really enjoy making friends and communicating with foreigners.I would appreciate it if I'm offered the job.I believe I can be of great help to you.

I am looking forward to your early reply!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

本篇范文涵盖了所有的写作要点。正文部分包括了写作背景和意图、个人身份、个人优势、求职态度等基本要素。文章的要点安排也较符合逻辑。文章使用了一些基本的话题表达，语言较为得体和准确。段落中心句“The job will benefit me a lot.”和高级句式 “I would appreciate it if...”的使用增加了文章的得分点。