NEAT七级试题选登（五）

短文改错（共一题，每处错误1分，计10分）

下面短文中有十处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面劃一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改十处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。（请将答案写在答题纸上）

Wildlife trade covers a wide range of everyday product， such as flowers， plants and clothes. Nearly all of we are consumers of them in one form or another.

However， a large proportion of this trade is the result of poaching （偷猎）， that is a criminal activity. It involve the killing of wild animals and the sale of parts of their bodies for profit.

Rhinos are being killed in large numbers increasing. Nowadays international criminal organisations use advance technology such as high-powered rifles （步枪） and helicopters.

There's a demand for rhino horns because many people believe that they can used as a cure for some diseases. Many rhinos are also killed for their hide （兽皮） which can be made from luxury fashion goods such as boots and shoes.

The demand for these products is posing a huge threat to wild rhino populations， bring them to the edge of extinction. In seven years， the rhino poaching worldwide has increased 30 times and reached a new record of. As a result， three of the five living species of rhinos are now classified as critically endangered.

书面表达（共二题，计25分）

本部分共有两道大题，其中（A）题满分10分，（B）题满分15分，计25分。

（A） Suppose you're Anya， you've got the information that some volunteers are in need to offer help at the next Olympic Games. The volunteers must speak both Chinese and English well and would like to help visitors. You'd like to be one of them. Using the following outline， please write an application letter to olympichelper.com in no fewer than 80 words， not including the given beginning and ending.

● You've been studying English for 10 years;

● You once worked in some shops to help customers;

● You volunteered in helping the disabled before;

● You love the Olympic idea and hope to be part of it.

Dear Sir or Madam，

I am writing to apply for a job as an Olympic volunteer.

________________________________Please feel free to contact me if you need more information or for an interview at any time.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely，

Anya

（B） Imagine that your father is very rich， but you and your family can hardly see him because he's quite busy with his job. You hope to be with him more. Now please write an essay in no fewer than 100 words to express your idea of “Money Is Not the Most Important Thing in the World” and explain the reasons.

（A） One possible version：

Dear Sir or Madam，

I am writing to apply for a job as an Olympic volunteer.

I'm bilingual in Chinese and English. I've studied English for ten years. I once worked in a clothes shop， a bookshop and so on. I also did voluntary work for the disabled， so I've a lot of experience with people of different ages and needs now.

I'm very interested in working for you because I would enjoy being part of the Olympic Games. I really believe in the Olympic idea and love this job helping people in need. I'm sure it'll help me learn a lot and allow me to serve others a lot， too.

Please feel free to contact me if you need more information or for an interview at any time.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely，

Anya

（94 Words）

（B） One possible version：

My father earned a huge salary and had a very successful career， but we seldom saw him. For me， money is not the most important thing in the world.

Without doubt， there is a feeling of safety in being wealthy. We'll never be homeless or hungry. With the money， my father can buy me everything I want. In addition， it means my father will probably have reached the top of his career and he'll have achieved success as well as wealth， but I want to ask him， my dear father， “Will you be happy？ Will your family be happy？”

Therefore， I think on the one hand， money makes us rich， but on the other hand， it makes us poor. It's true you're able to buy your children everything they want. However， you can't give them all the time and love they want. For this reason， I conclude that money is definitely not the most important thing in the world.

（158 Words）