安全与急救话题作文探究（一）

杨庆春

话题分析

安全是我们日常生活、学习和工作的根本保障，尤其是学生的安全牵动着每位老师和家长的心。安全与急救这个话题包括交通安全、校园安全、活动安全、网络安全等方面，涉及学生在面对地震、火灾、水灾、踩踏事故、野浴溺水、突发疾病、校园暴力等灾难和意外事故时如何自救逃生与自我保护。安全问题越来越受到人们的关注，这自然也势必成为中考写作的热门话题。

命题预测

安全与急救这一话题与日常生活学习联系紧密，取材广泛，从写作体裁上看，我们可以写成记叙文、说明文、议论文或应用文等不同文体。这要求学生必须掌握各种文体的写作技巧和方法。历年中考试题中都有安全與急救方面的书面表达题，常常要求学生借助文字提示或图表提示来进行作文。

近三年来各地中考命题多出现如下话题：

1. 保护安全： 2019年四川南充（How to keep safe）、2019年贵州安顺（Protect ourselves at school; How to protect ourselves）、2019年湖南怀化（Protect ourselves， cherish our lives）、2019年广西河池（Keep away from the danger！）、 2018年湖北十堰（How can we make ourselves safe？）、2017年山东潍坊（How to protect our lives）、2017年黑龙江龙东图表作文（How we protect ourselves）;

2.交通事故：2017年江苏徐州图表作文（交通事故）;

3. 突发事件：2017年湖南益阳（珍爱生命，预防溺水）;

4. 安全教育：2019年湖南邵阳、2019年四川凉山、2018年山东德州（安全教育）;

5. 遵守安全规则：2017年四川成都图表作文、2018年湖北恩施图表作文（遵守安全规则）。

常用句式

★可用在段首的句子：

It is very important to keep safe.

I have to tell you something about safety.

Camping is interesting， but sometimes is dangerous.

The danger is around us.

As a student， how to keep safe is very important.

More and more people realize the importance of safety.

Value life， value yourself， have a good life.

How will we prevent such serious accident？

★可用在段中的句子：

I was so careless that I hurt myself.

In case of an accident， bicycle riders should know how to give first aid.

To my surprise， she hurt herself seriously.

Try to stay there and don’t move.

Stop your bike， let the person cross the road first.

You should wait until the traffic light turns green.

If we can do all these well， we’ll have a safe and happy life.

It’s dangerous to go swimming only by yourself.

Everyone should follow the traffic rules.

Ask/shout for help， when you are in danger.

We should learn from the brave hero.

We have to know how to escape from the fire.

When you are in danger， you have to shout loudly for help.

Almost every year in summer， many people are reported dead from drowning accident.

If a person has an accident， he needs medical care before a doctor can be found.

When you give first aid， you must pay attention to three things.

First we should check the wound to say how serious it is.

★可用在段尾的句子：

We must not swim alone in rivers and lakes.

In a word， we should try our best to behave well.

We live only once， we must cherish life.

In a word， we must try our best to protect and value our lives！

All in all， we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.

Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times！

We must remember that safety should always come first while swimming.

In a word， this young man is the one who is respected a lot！