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旅游与交通

2019-09-10

疯狂英语·爱英语 2019年1期
关键词:连贯行文表妹

★话题概述

关于旅游与交通的话题有很多,比如:旅游常识、询问与预订、交通规则、问路与指路、安全条例与标志识别等。针对本话题,中考命题专家可能会从以下角度来命题:

1.旅游计划的拟订,旅游物品的准备及注意事项。

2.酒店、景点机(车)票等的预订及费用。

3.国外旅游注意事项。

4.度假方式的变化及其原因。

5.描述旅游经历,谈论旅游感受。

6.问路与指路。

7.私家车激增的利与弊。

8.交通方式的变化及其对人们生活的影响。

9.交通安全。

★高频词语

1.相关名词

traffic 交通, travel 旅游, journey 旅行, trip 旅行, tour 旅游, travel agency 旅行社, guide 向导, airline / airway 航空公司, flight ticket 飞机票, passport 护照, visa 签证, iden

tity card 身份证, tent 帐篷, camp 露营, hotel 旅馆, tourist attraction 旅游景点, places of interest 名胜, scenic spots 景点, national park 国家公园, DIY tour 自助游, space tourism 太空旅游, group / organized tour 团体游, a selfdriven trip 自驾游, speed limit 限速, red light 红灯, parking lot 停车场

2.动词短语

take a flight 乘飞机

go on a trip 出游

see sb. off 给某人送行

be on holiday / a visit 度假;旅行

go on a wildlife tour / a hiking trip 参加野生动物之旅/去远足

explore a forest / a desert 探险森林/沙漠

enlarge one s knowledge 增长知识

3.相关形容词

interesting 令人感兴趣的, exciting 令人兴奋的, attractive 吸引人的, comfortable 舒适的, funny 有趣的, fantastic 极好的, safe 安全的, dangerous 危险的, different 不同的, close to 在……近旁, crowded 拥挤的, boring / dull 无趣的, tiring 无聊的, far from 远离, more and more 越来越……, wellorganized 有序的

4.交通方式

walk / on foot 走路;步行

ride a bike / by bike 骑自行车

drive a car / by car 开小轿车

take a bus / by bus 乘公共汽车

take a taxi / by taxi 乘出租车

by boat / ship / water / sea 坐船(走水路)

transfer (在旅途中)转乘(换乘)

5.交通词语

safety first 安全第一

traffic light 交通灯;红绿灯

traffic rules / regulations 交通规则

keep left / right 靠左/靠右

crossroad / crossing 十字路口

wait until the green light 等到綠灯再走

traffic jam 交通堵塞

traffic accident 交通事故

★经典句型

1.Life will be more colorful if we travel. 旅游可以使我们的生活更加丰富多彩。

2.Traveling makes us close to the nature. 旅游可以使我们亲近大自然。

3.It makes me know the world better. 它会使我更好地了解世界。

4.They also think that traveling is good for their health. 他们也认为旅游对健康有好处。

5.There are some people who aren t fond of traveling. 有些人不喜欢旅游。

6.These days traveling is becoming more and more popular. 最近旅游越来越受欢迎。

7.We can make friends with people from different places. 我们可以和来自不同地域的人们交朋友。

8.From these points, we can see that traveling is really a good activity. 通过这些,我们可以了解到旅游真的是一项很好的活动。

9.The train is crowded sometimes and passengers have to sit for a long time. 坐火车有时候会很拥挤,而且乘客们要坐很长时间。

10.When we travel on a train, every

thing we see will leave quickly. 当我们坐火车旅游时,看到的东西会一闪而过。

11.Most of these cannot be found from our textbooks. 這些中的大部分在我们的教科书里是不可能找到的。

12.I suggest that we have more police

men working at the crossroads. 我建议应该要有更多的警察在路口执勤。

13.Only in this way will they not break the traffic rules again. 只有这样,他们才不会再次违反交通规则。

14.Traffic in cities is getting heavier and heavier. 城市的交通变得越来越拥挤。

15.Great changes have taken place in the ways that people spend their holidays over the period from the year... to... 在……年至……年间,人们的度假方式已经发生了巨大的变化。

16.Large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. 大量的游客涌到动物园会导致交通堵塞。

17.However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their know

ledge and broaden their horizons. 然而,其他人更喜欢出去旅游,因为这既可以增长知识,又可以开阔视野。

18.We can enjoy many worldfamous places, such as... 我们能欣赏许多世界级名胜,比如……

★写作模板

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to !

I feel honored to be your guide to the

. First of all, I d like to express my welcome to all of you.

Our schedule for today is to visit the fam

ous scenic spot—the , which is

. I m quite sure that you will be im

pressed by and the long history of the city as well. Wish you have great fun during the whole day!

OK, next, I will show you around the whole and introduce it in detail to you.

★题例解读

假如你是北京的李丽,下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹李兰要来北京旅游。请根据以下提示,给她写一封信,并告诉她在北京旅游期间要做一名文明的(wellmannered)中学生。

写作要点:

1.欢迎她来北京。

2.介绍北京的情况

(1)下周天气:白天最高温度超过33℃。

(2)交通方式:最好乘坐地铁。

(3)必去的名胜:长城。

3.对她在北京旅游期间如何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议。

写作要求:

1.可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯。

2.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰。

3.至少80词。

Dear Li Lan,

How are you doing?

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Li

【题目解读】

1.审题立意

本文为提纲式说明文体裁。文章要求你就“文明旅游”这一话题给表妹写信,要求简要介绍北京的情况并告诉她在北京旅游更需要讲究文明。在写作时,你不仅要把题目中所给的信息写出来,而且要能适度发挥,这样写出来的文章才会内容丰富,有血有肉。

2.信息要点

(1)表示欢迎。

(2)介绍北京的情况。

(3)必去的名胜。

(4)如何文明旅游。

3.注意事项

(1)本文属于说明文,文章所用的时态要以一般现在时态为主。

(2)可适当发挥,但切忌直译要点造成信息的简单罗列和堆砌。

(3)注意保持行文连贯,使文章富有条理性和逻辑性。

【佳作赏析1】

Dear Li Lan,

How are you doing? ①I m pleased to hear that you ll come to Beijing for a journey. Now I will tell you something about Beijing.

The highest temperature will be more than 33℃ during the daytime next week. ②After your arrival at Beijing, you are advised to choose the subway as your main transportation since it can take you almost anywhere you want to go in Beijing. ③As for the places of interest you must go to, it must be the Great Wall.

④While traveling in Beijing, keep in mind that you should be a wellmannered middle school student. ⑤You can throw rubbish nowhere except in dustbins. I m looking forward to seeing you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Li

【名师点评】

本文脉络清晰,内容充实,观点鲜明。作者首先表示了对表妹的欢迎,接着简要介绍了北京的情况以及可以去参观的地方,还提到如何文明旅游,重点信息一个不落。文中从句、介词短语、非谓语动词等的巧妙运用,使文章达到语言精练、言简意赅的效果。特别是多处恰当地用到了过渡词句,使文章语言更加自然、流畅。

①这是书信类写作的惯用语句,表示一种客套。

②巧用了名词arrival,简洁但更显新意。

③过渡词句,将上下文很好地衔接起来。

④“连词+分词”结构用得很好,这句话同时还是一个过渡句。

⑤此句远胜过一般的表达方式(You can t throw rubbish everywhere.)。

【佳作赏析2】

Dear Li Lan,

How are you doing? I m glad to hear that you will come to Beijing next week. Since this is your first visit to Beijing, ①I ll offer you a brief introduction to Beijing.

During the daytime next week, the highest temperature will reach more than 33℃. ②So, you are advised to take a subway which is cool inside and convenient to take. ③One of the places of interest in Beijing you must go to is the Great Wall, which is wellknown all over the world. During the trip, we must behave well, ④never throwing rubbish everywhere, drawing or carving on the walls. ⑤With so many places available, I believe you will have a good time here.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Li

【名师点评】

本文涵盖了所有的内容要点:先是对表妹的欢迎,接着写下周北京的天气,然后建议表妹出行方式的选择及好玩的地方,最后交代旅游期间的注意事项,特别是文明举止方面。全文条理清晰,行文连贯。另外,在句式的使用上,灵活处理,句式多样,让文章增色不少。

①此句用法高超,比“I ll introduce Beijing to you.”的表达效果要好得多。

②在由which引导的定语从句里还有两个并列的表语,使得句式丰富多彩。

③再次连用了两个定语从句,可以看出作者对英语句子结构的熟练掌握。

④连用了三个现在分词短语作状语,比连用两个简单句或两个并列句的效果要好得多,简洁但不简单。

⑤“with+宾语+宾补”结构,这一高级结构使文章更加紧凑,行文更加连贯。

【参考范文】

Dear Li Lan,

How are you doing?I m pleased that you ll come to Beijing for a journey. Now let me tell you something about Beijing.

The highest temperature is more than 33℃ during the daytime next week. And you can go anywhere by subway, because it s very convenient and cheap. As an old say

ing goes,“He who doesn t reach the Great Wall is not a true man.” So you shouldn t miss climbing it when staying here.

To be a wellmannered middle school student during your travel, you should put rubbish in dustbins. Besides, you should behave well and try your best to help others.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Li

★寫作尝试

寒假就要到了,你父母想带你外出旅游。请根据下表提供的信息,在三个旅游地中,选择一个你最想去的地方和适合的交通方式,写出一份旅游计划,并简单说明理由。

词数:60~80词。

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