学校生活与课外活动

2019-06-13安徽宿州市泗县一中吴安运

疯狂英语·新读写 2019年6期

关键词：文化节词数课外活动

安徽宿州市泗县一中吴安运

◎文体概述

学校生活涉及在校学习的课程和学校、班级或学生会等举行的各项比赛或课外活动，如聚会、野餐、烧烤、春游等；还包括学生的穿着、发型、预习、复习、讨论、归纳等学习活动及教师的教学方法等。高考作文可能会从以下角度命题：

1.就学生的穿着、发型、行为举止等发表看法。

2.就预习、复习、讨论、归纳等课堂学习活动和教师教学方法等发表看法。

3.就任课教师开展评教活动发表看法。

4.就学校在节假日该不该补课发表看法。

5.就学生该不该参加课外各种形式的训练，如钢琴培训、外语培训、勤工俭学等发表看法。

体裁以应用文为主，如可能会要求考生就某项比赛写一份通知，或就聚会、野餐、烧烤、春游等课外活动写活动安排或日记。

◎写作模板

I'm a student.I study in __________.I have a wonderful school life.Now let me tell you something about my school life.I get up at about_____________every weekday.I have breakfast at___________ .My classes begin at___________.After classes,.I always have lunch __________.After school, .I go to library __________.On Saturday and Sunday, __________.How do you like my school life?Could you tell me something about yours?→综述→日常活动→询问对方情况

模板范文

I'm a student.I study in Beijing No.4 Senior High School.I have a wonderful school life.Now let me tell you something about my school life.

I get up at about 6:30 every weekday.I have breakfast at 7:00.My classes begin at 7:20.After classes,I play games with my classmates.I always have lunch at home with my parents.After school,I often play basketball or football with my friends.I go to library every Tuesday and Friday.On Saturday and Sunday,I often study the piano.

How do you like my school life?Could you tell me something about yours?

◎经典句型

1.Recently we have had a heated discussion as to whether we should have term exams.最近，我们就是否应该进行学期考试进行了激烈的讨论。

2.The extracurricular activity is a necessary part of the school life.课外活动是学校生活不可缺少的一部分。

3.There are varieties of out-of-class activities in our school,which we can take part in after class.我们学校有多种多样的课外活动，我们课后可以参加。

4.The meeting will be held on the first floor of the school library and last ten days,from June 10th to 20th.这次会议将于6月10日至20日在学校图书馆一楼举行，为期十天。

5.As a student,I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.作为一名学生，我坚决支持这次活动，因为它既有意义又有用。

6.Only by reading widely can we gain more knowledge and broaden our horizons.只有博览群书我们才能增长知识，开阔视野。

7.We should take/seize every possible opportunity to acquire more useful knowledge and get fully developed.我们应抓住一切可以利用的机会去获取更多的知识并得到全面的发展。

8.Not only did it improve their spoken English,but also it brought them much fun.这不仅提高了他们的英语口语，也给他们带来了许多乐趣。

9.We gathered at the school gate and started out at seven o'clock.We got a warm welcome on/upon our arrival.我们在校门口集合，7点出发。一到那儿，我们就受到了热烈的欢迎。

10.A child poor at math may be talented in painting.一个数学差的小孩儿可能是绘画天才。

11.I prefer to fail rather than cheat in the exam.我宁愿考不及格，也不愿意考试作弊。

12.I'm determined to do well in my lessons so as not to let my parents down.为了不让我的父母失望，我决心把功课学好。

13.A large number of students find that after long hours of study,they can relax both physically and mentally by taking part in school activities.许多学生发现参加学校活动可以使他们在长时间学习之后放松身心。

14.We students of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books,newspapers or magazines to the students in the lower grades.我们高三的学生们被号召把我们用过的书、报纸及杂志赠送给低年级的同学们。

15.As for me,we have benefited a lot from this activity,not only broadening our horizons,but also developing our interest in science.依我看，我们在这次活动中收获很大，它不仅开阔了我们的视野，而且培养了我们对科学的兴趣。

16.So far we have conducted/carried out a variety of activities on English learning,such as watching English films,holding a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students.迄今为止，关于英语学习我们已经开展了多种多样的活动，如观看英文电影、举行圣诞晚会以及与外国学生聚会等。

◎典题链接

（2019届安徽省江南名校高三大联考）假定你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华，你校将在下周五举办 “校园文化节（Campus Culture Festival）”系列活动。请给你班留学生Jim写封邮件，邀请他参加。邮件的内容包括：

1.介绍你选择的活动内容；

2.说明参加该活动的理由；

3.询问是否愿意参加该活动。注意：

1.词数不少于100；

2.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

I'm writing to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival” in our school.

Yours,

Li Hua

【试题解读】

1.审题立意

该篇书面表达以书信体裁作为考查方式。书信体裁是学生常见的一种书面表达形式。从内容上看，本文要求考生根据题目要求写封邀请信，邀请对方来学校参加“校园文化节”。但题目并没有给出具体的活动，这是本篇习作的一个难点，同时也是重点所在。这要求学生在写作前认真审题，做到心中有数，知道要写什么，怎么写，怎样才能写好。

认真审题之后，我们就要拟定一个自己选择的活动，这是全文的核心。这个活动的选择是我们自己想象出来的，我们可以根据自己的爱好，同时抓住文化这一主线挑选出这样的一个活动来。然后，叙述自己挑选它的缘由。最后询问对方是否感兴趣，并邀请对方参加。这是全文的主要脉络，但要写得出色，必须在结构上、内容上多下功夫。为了提高书面表达的得分档次，学生在写作时也要注意自己的语言表达，可以使用一些长短句和必要的过渡词，使文章衔接自然。

2.写作要点

（1）介绍活动的大体情况；

（2）你所选择的活动；

（3）阐述选择该活动的理由；

（4）诚邀对方参加。

3.注意事项

（1）侧重所选择的活动及理由这一主要方面；

（2）主次分明，语言简练，脉络清晰。

【佳作赏析1】

Dear Jim,

I am writing to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival” in our school.You can experience interesting activities here.

As a member of Environmental Protection Association in our school,I will choose the activity where we collect the trash and use it to create some practical gadget like vases and baskets.①After that,we will display our works.As far as I am concerned,it is of great significance and benefit.②Not only can it dig out the hidden value of the used things and rubbish,but also it can make us students pay more attention to the effects of what we produce in daily life.③

Are you curious about the festival?It will be really great if you can come and join us.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮点分析：全文结构严谨，过渡自然，语言运用富于变化，显得老练娴熟。此外，作者还非常熟练地使用了倒装语序和be+of+n.等诸多高级句式和结构，为文章内容的充实提供了保障和基石。特别是利用垃圾转废为宝的这种环保理念非常值得称道，也为我们上了一节环境保护、利用资源和节约资源的教育课。总之，这是一篇优秀的习作。

①这是一个长句，后一分句中使用了where引导的定语从句，修饰the activity，运用准确。

②这里作者使用了be+of+n.的高级结构，表明该活动非常有意义。

③not only置于句首时，其后需部分倒装。这里作者使用得精准，且语句内容丰富，是全文的一个亮点句。

【佳作赏析2】

Dear Jim,

I am writin g to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival”in our school.It is very popular with us students.①

It's to be held next week,and then you will experience various kinds of activities from papercutting to making sweet dumplings.②This year,as a crazy fan of Chinese classical music,I will go in for the show of a classical concert,from which I definitely will enjoy a lot.③As you know,it's music that sometimes makes us relaxed and reduces our pressure and worries.④In addition,there will be an exhibition of different kinds of Chinese classical instruments,such as zheng,drum,flute and so on.

I have no idea whether you are interested in it,if so,please let me know.⑤Looking for your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮点分析：本文开门见山表达了写信目的，点明主题——邀请对方参加“校园文化节”。写作内容丰富，作者严格按照写作要求，布局谋篇合理，语言组织精密。文中多个复杂句式的使用体现出作者扎实的语言功底。此外，be popular with、various、definitely等词汇的精准使用，使文章亮点颇多，读之有味。

①此句开门见山，直接表明写信的目的——邀请Jim参加“校园文化节”活动，这是书信体裁较为常见的一种开篇方式。

②这是一个由and连接的并列句，其中前一分句中be to do是将来时的一种表达方式，活动被举办属被动，故作者用to be done；后一分句中from...to...列举了丰富的活动内容。

小贴士此句还可以这样表达：

It is going to take place next week,and then you will experience different kinds of activitiesfrom paper-cutting to making sweet dumplings.

It is going to be held next week,and then you will experience a variety of activities from paper-cutting to making sweet dumplings.

③介词from和关系代词which构成的定语从句在这里运用得自然地道。

④本句含有It is...that强调句型，强调音乐的重要性和好处。该句式的正确使用体现出作者较好的语法功底。

⑤这是一个主从复合句，其中从句部分为省略表达if so,该结构看似简单，但能熟练运用则体现了作者英语语言运用地娴熟。

●标准范文

Dear Jim,

I am writing to inform you of the annual event called “Campus Culture Festival” in our school.

This year the festival will provide various activities.As a lover of traditional culture,I'd like to choose kite-flying.There will be pictures,poems and proverbs about kites when the time comes.We will also have the chance to learn how to make kites from folk artists.Besides,a competition for kite-flying will be held.I'm sure we'll develop our awareness of traditional culture and practical ability during this activity.

If you are interested in it,please let me know.Hope to meet you at the Campus Culture Festival.

Yours,

Li Hua