Me in the Eyes of My Teachers

重庆市人民（融侨）小学六（1）班 余沐霖

指导老师：陈江月

评语

A very mature self-re fl ection. Try to combine sentences together instead of trying to start them with words like “ because” and “so”.

这是一篇非常成熟的自我反省的文章。请你试着合并短句，并且不要用“because”和“so”作为句子的开头。