主题写作指导——学校生活

陕西省大荔中学 高倩宝

情境1 融入新班级

假定你是新华中学的学生张华，班里有一名从外地转来的同学李明,他一时无法融入新的班集体中,感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:

1.帮他分析原因;

2.给他提出建议;

3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。

注意:词数120～150左右。

范文赏析

Dear Li Ming,

Best regards,Zhang Hua

满分作文第1段：引出话题，说明写信原因布局谋篇Dear Li Ming,We’re glad that you can be a new member of our class,but I noticed that you seemed unable to adapt yourself to the new environment since you came.第2段：分析李明无法融入班级的原因I think the biggest obstacle lies in yourself.You may regard yourself as a newcomer and feel uneasy to communicate with us.Besides,there may be some difficulties in language since you are not a native student，so it takes you some time to make proper adjustment.第3段：针对该问题陈述自己的建议和做法Here are some suggestions that can give you a hand.First of all,you should try to get rid of the feelings of being lonely.Second,why not try talking with others and taking part in various activities actively?As for me,I’m always here ready to help you and I’ll encourage more classmates to study and play with you.Best regards,Zhang Hua

好词积累

1.adaptv.适应

2.obstaclen.阻碍；障碍

3.newcomern.新来的人

4.uneasyadj.不自在的

5.properadj.适当的；合适的

6.adjustmentn.调整

7.give sb a hand帮助某人

8.get rid of摆脱

增分美句

1.We’re glad that you can be a new member of our class,but I noticed that you seemed unable to adapt yourself to the new environment since you came.我们很高兴你能成为我们班级的一名新成员，但是我发现你来到这里之后，你似乎不能适应新的环境。

be glad that...“很高兴……”；第2个that引导的是宾语从句；since引导的是时间状语从句。

2.Besides,there may be some difficulties in language since you are not a native student，so it takes you some time to make proper adjustment.此外，由于你不是本地的学生，在语言上你可能会有些困难，因此你需要花些时间进行适当的调整。

句中since引导的是原因状语从句；it takes sb some time to do sth“做某事花某人多长时间”。

情境2 邀请朋友参加摄影展

（2016·全国甲卷）假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括：

1.主题：环境保护；

2.展览时间；

3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

范文赏析

满分作文第1段：说明写作意图，发出邀请布局谋篇Dear Peter,I am writing to invite you toparticipatein a photography exhibition held for international high school students.第2段：简述邀请原因，详细说明活动的主题、时间及参加方式The exhibition,of which the theme is environment protection，is hosted by the photography club in our school.I know you are fond of photography and have taken many photos.Coincidentally，the photos you showed me last time just match the theme of this exhibition.All the photos submitted by the participants are scheduled for exhibition from June 25 to June 30.The winners will be chosen and announced on June 30.If you are interested,please send your photos tointlphotoshow@gmschool.combefore June 15.第3段：表达祝愿Look forward to your participation.I believe they will have a high opinion of your photos.Yours,Li Hua

好词积累

1.participatev.参加

2.hostv.主办

3.be fond of喜欢

4.take photo拍照

5.coincidentallyadv.碰巧地

6.matchv.相配；匹配

7.submitv.呈送；提交

8.schedulev.排定；预定

9.winnern.获胜者

10.announcev.宣布；公布

增分美句

1.I am writing to invite you to participate in a photography exhibition held for international high school students.我写信是想邀请你参加国际中学生举办的摄影展。

句中的held for international high school students为过去分词短语作后置定语，修饰名词exhibition。

2.The exhibition,of which the theme is environment protection，is hosted by the photography club in our school.这次展览以环保为主题，由我校的摄影俱乐部主办。

句中of which the theme is environment protection是一个“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句。

情境3 欢迎交换生

（2014·天津卷）假设你是晨光中学高二（1）班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：

（1）表示欢迎；

（2）介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等)；（3）介绍本班情况；

（4）希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊。注意:

（1）请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；

（2）可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯；

范文赏析

（3）词数不少于100；开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇：

交换生exchange student Dear Chris,

I’m Li Jin,monitor of Class One， Grade Eleven.___

好词积累

1.extendv.给予；发出（邀请、欢迎等）

2.on behalf of代表

3.introducev.介绍

4.localadj.当地的

5.pleasantadj.宜人的

6.concernn.关爱；关怀

7.fit in相处融洽

8.involvev.（使）参与

增分美句

1.Generally speaking,the climate here is pleasant though it may be a little cold in winter.总的来说,这里气候宜人,尽管冬天可能会有一点冷。

句中though引导的是让步状语从句。

2.Don’t worry about food since you can find various kinds of food here,including western food.不用担心食物问题,因为在这里你能找到各种食物,包括西餐。

句中since引导的是原因状语从句。

3.As for our class,it’s a big family where everyone shows love and concern for each other.说到我们班,这是一个大家庭,人人都相互关爱、相互关心。

句中where引导的是定语从句,表示抽象化、模糊化的地点,先行词为family。

情境4 世界读书日

假定你是校读书协会会长，在一年一度的4月23日，即“世界读书日”(World Book Day)即将到来之际，校英语报邀请你写一篇短文,简要介绍“世界读书日”并呼吁同学们多读书。写作要点如下：

1.简述世界读书日(发起时间及目的等)；

2.读书的益处；

3.呼吁同学们多读书。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：开阔眼界broaden one’s horizons

World Book Day

范文赏析

布局谋篇满分作文第1段：简单介绍“世界读书日”World Book Day On April 23 every year,there is an event called World Book Day,which was started by UNESCO in 1995 for the purpose of encouraging more people to form the habit of reading.第2段：有条理地说明读书的益处To begin with,reading can broaden our horizons and enrich our minds.What’s more,in order to know the way of solving problems,we may turn to books for help.Last but not least,the principles in books can teach us how to distinguish between right and wrong.第3段：发出号召，呼吁大家多读书Books are our loyal friends forever.No matter when we realize the importance of reading， we can enjoy the pleasure of it.Let’s respond to the appeal of reading more and make it an essential part of our life.

好词积累

1.eventn.事件

2.for the purpose of 目的是……

3.formv.(使)形成

4.turn to 求助于

5.last but not least 最后但同样重要的是

6.principlen.道德原则

7.distinguishv.区分；辨别

8.loyaladj.忠诚的

9.respondv.做出反应

10.appealn.呼吁;号召

增分美句

1.What’s more,in order to know the way of solving problems,we may turn to books for help.此外，为了了解解决问题的方法，我们可以求助于书籍。

in order to“为了”，引导的动词不定式作目的状语。

2.Last but not least,the principles in books can teach us how to distinguish between right and wrong.最后但同样重要的是，书中的道理能够教会我们如何明辨是非。

how to distinguish between right and wrong构成的是“疑问词+动词不定式”结构，在句中作teach的宾语。

3.No matter when we realize the importance of reading，we can enjoy the pleasure of it.无论何时我们意识到读书的重要性，我们都可以享受到读书的乐趣。

No matter when相当于Whenever，引导让步状语从句。