竭尽所能

安徽省合肥市第四十六中学 九年级（16）班 宋 杨

When I was a 6 year-old boy，I began to study in a primary school next to our community.Two years later，I was 8 and I was in Grade 3.English classes were opened in our grade at that time.At first，I had no interest in studying English，so I often failed my English exams，and our English teacher was disappointed with me.

One day，my English teacher told me that she thought I had the inborn ability of studying English well and I was just lazy！After this embarrassing conversation.I began to work very hard and my interest in studying English increased a lot because I didn’t want to disappoint my English teacher’s expectation.In the final examination of Grade 3，I got the highest score in our class.

When I become a middle school student，another trouble appeared.I couldn’t remember the grammar very well，so I recited it again and again...Day by day my English level becomes higher and higher.As time goes on，my vocabulary is growing bigger and bigger.In other people’s mind.I am a lively boy now，but they don’t know I always wanted to complain about something in the past∶why fate was so unfair to me？ Why？ Until that day...On that day，I watched a varied show.The honored guest said that complaint is of no use，do it yourself！ I thought I got it！ I am a lively boy now！ The words that the teacher and the honored guest said opened the window of my heart.There is an old saying∶“Teachers open the door，but you must enter by yourself！”

So in my opinion，teachers’encouragement，your effort and sweat are the best tools and help！

教师点评：

这不是应试作文，而是一篇关于作者学习英语经历的心态变化和最后终有所悟的日常习作。

本文条理清晰，主题突出，文风朴实，行文流畅，用词准确，基本无语法错误。作者的感悟也富有启发意义，是一篇值得中学生借鉴的优秀之作。