How to Become a Good Student

韩天福

In order to become a good student， you should keep good habit① and ways in learning all the subjects. First of all， you should prepare for lessons before class. Its very important for you to listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. After class， you should review the lessons and finish your homework on time. Its good to study in pairs or groups and help each other. If you want to make a great achievements②， you should go on exploring some new ways of learning. Therefore， summing up experience， drawing lessons and working hard is great important to you. For example， in learning English， besides more listening， speaking， reading and writing， you should practice to speak③ it in and out of class and remember new words， grammar points as many as possible. If you have problems， youd better ask teachers for help. On the other hand， remember to take more exercises④ and enough sleep every day. When you get tired， youd better relax yourself. I hope all these will be very helpful to you. Do you want to have a try？

湖北省十堰市鄖县杨溪中学九（2）班 王娜

点评

1. 优点：

该同学英语基本功相对扎实，整篇文章内容详实，语言流畅，时态准确，词句运用恰到好处。

2. 需要修改的地方：

①habit应改为名词复数habits。根据上下文内容，此处应表达复数意义。

②achievements应改为achievement。前文有表单数的冠词a。

③to speak应改为speaking。 practice后应接动名词形式。

④exercises应改为exercise。该词意为“锻炼、运动”时为不可数名词。

3. 评分：

按中考满分15的标准，本文修改前可得13分。endprint