高考写作之建议信

张勋

近年的高考英语作文题，应用文中的信件写作可以说占到了绝对的统治地位。而建议信又是信件写作最主要的类型之一。掌握建议信的写作模式，熟悉建议信的写作方法，牢记建议信的常用句式，可以帮助同学们在写作板块以不变应万变，事半功倍。

建议信的常见结构：

[开头]

在写作的开头部分，应该快速引入主题/话题。在建议信的开头部分，通常我们会就写信人的某一特定要求给出具体的建议，并用一定的句式引入。此时用一些特定句式会节省很多时间，同时也可以减少我们临时构思句子导致的失误。

给某人建议

give sb. constructive advice

give some suggestions

show/present ones opinions

make some recommendations

offer some proposals

关于

on/about/concerning

常用句式

Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on/about/concerning ...

Hearing that ...， Im writing to give you some constructive proposals about ...

I have received your letter saying that ...， I would like to make some recommendations about ...

I am writing to you to present/show my opinions on the problem that ...

連接词

first and foremost，first of all，in the first place，above all，to begin /start with，in the beginning ...

secondly，in addition/additionally，whats more，furthermore，moreover，more importantly，in the next place ...

lastly，finally，in the end，at last，eventually，last but not （the） least，most importantly ...

[主体]

在写作的主体部分，一是要使用多样的句式来丰富文章的表达，二是要把所有的要点准确、清晰地表达出来，从而使文章完整。同样是提出建议，我们可以有很多不同的表达。

常用句式

I would like to suggest/recommend that ...

One suggestion/recommendation is that you should ...

You are supposed to do ...

You would be wise to do ...

If I were you， I would do ...

It would be a good idea/beneficial if you could ...

[结尾]

在写作的结尾部分，应该干脆利落，简洁有力，就像豹子的尾巴一样。

常用句式

I hope you will find these proposals useful and practical.

I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into account/consideration.

If you want any further information， please contact me.

（I am） waiting for/awaiting your good news.

Your early reply will be highly appreciated.

Wish you good health/happiness./May you be happy.

Hope everything goes well with you.

Hope/Wish you all the best.

[模板]

Dear xxx，

How are you？ Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice concerning on/about how to _________. My suggestions are as follows. （写信目的）

First of all， you are supposed to ________. Besides/additionally/in addition， it will be a good idea if you could _________. Furthermore， I would like to recommend that _________. Lastly， if I were you， I would _________. （详列建议）endprint

I hope that you will find these proposals practical. Im looking forward to hearing from you again. （希望与祝愿）

Yours，

Xxx

[实战演练]

假如你是李华，一年高考结束，新的高三又开始了。你的同学王伟新入高三，感到压力很大，写信向你求助。请你给他回一封信，内容包括如下建议：

1. 设立合理的目标；

2. 保持良好的心态；

3. 在运动中释放压力；

4. 多与老师父母沟通。

注意：1. 词数100词左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文連贯。

要点分解

1. 新入高三，感到压力很大；

2. 设立合理的目标，这样可以……；

3. 保持良好的心态，没有好的心态就会……；

4. 在运动中释放压力；

5. 跟老师父母多交流，他们经验丰富……。

[范文]

Dear Wang Wei，

How are you？ Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice concerning how to deal with the great pressure for entering grade 3 leads to your suffering from great stress. My suggestions are as follows.

First of all， you are supposed to have a goal， for it would be beneficial if you could set up a practical one that is achievable， thus building up your confidence. Additionally， it will be a good idea if you could maintain a good state of mind， without which you would be easily defeated， even when faced with a little quiz. Furthermore， I would like to recommend that you do proper exercise because it is a good way to relieve your stress in sports with your arms and legs stretched out. Lastly， if I were you， I would pour out my trouble to my teachers as well as my parents. So experienced are they that they will definitely help you out.

I hope that you will find these proposals helpful. Im looking forward to hearing from you again.

Sincerely yours，

Li Huaendprint