How to Get Along Well with Others

张曦

于莹 女，1992年毕业于山东师范大学，后一直从事初中英语的教学工作；中学高级教师、梁山县优秀教师，曾获市级优质课一等奖，连续多年所执教的班级在中考中取得优异成绩；2012年12月在山东省英语竞赛中荣获优秀指导教师称号；曾先后在《中学生英语》《山东教育导报》《现代中学生》《初中生英语学习》《英语辅导报》《英语周报》《学生导报》《新课堂》等国家级、省级报刊上发表教学论文三十多篇。

How to Get Along Well with Others

In our daily life， we have to contact with people. Therefore， it is very important of① us to know how to get along with other people. To get along good② with others and win their friendships， we must obey strictly the following words：

To begin with， we need to be honest with others and should always say what we mean. Lies will surely make people stay far from us in the long run. After all， honesty is the best policy. Second， we have to be humble enough. If we are proud in public， we can hardly win others respect， not to mention “friendship”. Finally， we should not be selfish. We should be kind for③ others instead. Meanwhile， we should learn how to show concern for others.

As long as we follow what is mentioned above， we will find that④ easy to get along well with others.

1. 優点：

这篇习作想要表达诚实守信是中华民族的传统美德。小作者表示，友善待人，关心别人，你就会赢得别人的尊重。其实，与人相处融洽是很容易的。

2. 需要修改的地方：

①of改为for。表示人的本性的形容词（如clever，foolish，nice）用of；表示事物的形容词（如easy，hard，difficult）用for。

②good改为well。修饰动词短语用副词well。

③for改为to。be kind to意为“对……友善”。

④that改为it。做形式宾语用it。

3. 评分：

按中考英语作文满分15分的评分标准，本文修改前可得12分。