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2017-06-24

疯狂英语·新读写 2017年6期
关键词:作文选家庭成员豆豆

作文选登

感谢各位老师和同学给豆豆寄来的作品。现在我们一起来好好欣赏这些优秀文章吧!

I Love You

by Grace Yu

I love you when you are mad,

I love you when you are bad.

I love you when you are writing,

I love you when you are dancing.

I love you, my mum,

I love you all the time.

For my mum

于嘉杨

深圳大学城丽湖实验小学 二年级

指导老师:郑曼

豆豆:这篇来自二年级同学的小诗,虽然没有华丽的辞藻、复杂的句式,但是却透出浓浓的温情。据说这首小诗还是小作者在妈妈生气的时候拿出来的“杀手锏”,直接让妈妈生气又感动呢。这份可爱和灵气,实在让豆豆忍不住点个赞呀!

Put Down Your Smart Phone

Today I will give you a speech about “Putting Down Your Smart Phone(智能手机)”.

Nowadays, everybody has a smart phone. You can see people are always bending(弯曲)down their heads and playing with their phones, anywhere and anytime.

The smart phone is good. It can help us with work and study. We can read books, get news and even do some exercises through smart phones.

But if you are addicted to(对……上瘾)the phone, your eyesight(视力)will get worse. You will lack(缺乏)the real and warm communication(交流)with real people. You will miss a lot of beautiful views(景色)in our real life.

So, let’s use the smart phone smartly. We can read books, draw a picture and chat(交谈)with friends face to face(面对面).

Put down the phone. Walk into real life!

龙安诺

内蒙古农业大学附属小学 五年级

指导老师:肖立婷 张秀萍

豆豆:小朋友喜欢玩手机是现今一个受到社会广泛关注的问题。在这篇演讲稿中,小作者敏锐地抓住热点,通过正反两方面讲述自己的观点,条理清晰,理据充分,是一篇很不错的议论文。

My Family

I have a big family.

There are five people in my family: my grandparents, my parents and me. My grandfather is a farmer. He often goes to the field(田地)by electric(电动的)bike. My grandmother usually waters flowers in the garden. She buys vegetables every morning. My father is short but strong. He is a worker. He is very funny. He often tells me lots of interesting things. My mother is an accountant(会计). She can type(打字)very quickly. She often helps me with my study in her free time.

I’m a lovely boy. I’m fourteen years old. I like all kinds of sports. I want to be a player when I grow up.

This is my family. I love my family!

严嘉烨

宁波市北仑区岷山学校 六年级

指导老师:顾华峥

豆豆:描写家庭成员是同学们在英语写作时常常会遇到的题目类型。在这篇文章中,小作者采用“总—分—总”的结构,把一个五口之家的温馨面貌展现在大家面前。虽然字数不多,但小作者对每位家庭成员的描述依然生动到位,同学们在写同类作文的时候可以模仿学习哟。

“豆豆有话说”「不限主题作品征稿」模式正在火热进行中。你的作品可以是作文、绘画、照片……写你想写的,画你想画的,拍你想拍的!这里是你的地盘,所以我们都“看”你的!如果是绘画作品和照片,还需要同学们用一两句英语简单描述自己的作品所呈现的内容。

经“过五关斩六将”后,最后入选的优秀小作者们将得到稿酬奖励和赠刊一本哟!大家还在等什么,赶紧开动脑筋来给我们投稿吧!

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