作文选登
2017-04-27
作文选登
感谢各位老师和同学给豆豆寄来的作品。现在我们一起来好好欣赏这些优秀文章吧!
A Colourful Guangzhou Flower Fair
When the Spring Festival comes every year, there is a colourful Flower Fair in Guangzhou. Do people only sell or buy flowers in it? No, they don’t.
Let’s go to the Flower Fair and have a look. There are different kinds of flowers here. They are roses, lilies, peach blossoms and so on. The old farmers grow those beautiful flowers for people.
What about other fun things in the Fair? We can see many arts and nice food. Look! The strong cook is cooking some chicken. A young painter is drawing a picture of flowers. A tall singer is singing an English song with his guitar. Some children are running and playing with some toy hammers. The policemen are working in the crowd.
Do you love the colourful Guangzhou Flower Fair?
潘诺懿
广州荔湾区汇龙小学 四年级
指导老师:苏洁珍
豆豆:这是一篇描写节庆活动的作文。小作者通过自己的视角和笔触将广州花市的种种有趣场景描述出来,语言准确、描写生动,让人印象深刻,恨不得能参与其中呢。
Mother’s Day
Mother’s Day first appeared in ancient Greece. In the United States, it is on the second Sunday in May every year. On this day, mothers usually get some gifts.
The carnation is regarded as dedicated to the mothers.
On Mother’s Day, I will draw a picture for my mother and tell her I love her very much. I will cook some nice food and clean the room. I think my mother will be very happy!
张晶莹
广州荔湾区汇龙小学 四年级
指导老师:苏洁珍
豆豆:描写节日是同学们在英语写作时常常会遇到的题目。在这篇作品中,小作者用图文并茂的形式表达自己对母亲节的理解,以及对妈妈的爱,文字流畅、感情真挚,相信妈妈看到了也一定很开心哟!
“豆豆有话说”「不限主题作品征稿」模式正在火热进行中。你的作品可以是作文、绘画、照片……写你想写的,画你想画的,拍你想拍的!这里是你的地盘,所以我们都“看”你的!如果是绘画作品和照片,还需要同学们用一两句英语简单描述自己的作品所呈现的内容。
经“过五关斩六将”后,最后入选的优秀小作者们将得到稿酬奖励和赠刊一本哟!大家还在等什么,赶紧开动脑筋来给我们投稿吧!
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My Family
Hi, everyone! My name is Kiki. Now, I want to introduce my family to you.
My family is small but warm.
There are three people in my family: my father, my mother and me. My father is a hardworking man. He is a policeman. He works in a police station. He likes watching TV and he watches it every night.
My mother is a housewife. She always goes to the cinema and sees a film. In the evening, she prepares dinner for my father and me.
I am a student. I study at Fangcun Primary School. My school is very big and beautiful. There are thirty-one classes in my school. And there are thirtyeight students in my class. I have three kind teachers: Miss Zhang, Miss Zhao and Mr. Li.
I love my warm family. And I hope that you have a warm family like mine.
豆豆:在这篇作文中,小作者采用“总—分—总”的结构,将一家三口每个人的特点娓娓道来。文章结构严谨,描写细致到位,最后的总结温馨而真挚,同学们在写同类作文的时候可以借鉴哟。