The Happiest Day

The Happiest Day

黄丽蓉老师点评：

春日游，杏花吹满头，阳春三月，正是去拥抱自然的季节。碧水蓝天，草长莺飞，少年们正在杏花微雨里植树。汗水与泥水混杂，笑脸和绿叶辉映。困难和泥泞终将被踩在脚下，希望和绿色终将在蓝天下蓬勃！该篇作文脉络清晰，重点突出，笔触细腻生动，用词精巧，是一篇非常好的记叙文！

On Mar. 22nd, we went to Shuiyun Valley to plant trees with the volunteers of the Lion Club.

The ride was about one hour. Unluckily, it began to rain when we got there. The rain got heavier and heavier, so we sheltered ourselves in a tent. Two hours later, the rain stopped, and we were led to a hill.

At the foot of the hill were some spades and saplings. We carried them up the hill. They were so heavy that we couldn’t walk very fast. Finally, we arrived at the top where a farmer taught us how to plant trees. First, we need to dig a deep hole. Next, put a tree in the hole and make it stand straight, then cover it with soil. I couldn’t wait to try, so I picked up a spade and started working.

It wasn’t such an easy job as it might look like, because the spade was very heavy. It took me about 15 minutes to finish planting the first tree. The following ones were much easier because I was becoming more and more experienced. When I finished the eighth one, the rain started again. We kept on working in raincoats.

Finally, we finished planting all the trees. We were very happy and proud, though we were feeling tired and hungry! Then we made our way down the hill and were back at that tent where dinner was soon served. We had chicken, fish, bamboo shoots[竹笋]and green peppers[青椒]. They were delicious.

After dinner, we were given some lovely presents by a farmer—a pot with a sunflower and a small bottle of honey! We said goodbye and hit the road back.

This was the happiest day I’ve ever had!

东莞明日书院 七年级 李宜锐

黄丽蓉老师点评：

小作者运用精确生动的语言记录了自己成长过程中最快乐的一天——一次非常特殊的植树经历，令人印象深刻，如临其境。