作文选登

作文选登

感谢各位老师和同学给豆豆寄来的作品。现在我们一起来好好欣赏这些优秀的文章吧！

Four Seasons in a Year

There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter.

Spring is a beautiful and colourful season in the year. It is warm. Leaves and grass become green. Animals come to play. Birds sing happily in the trees. We like going to play outdoors in spring.

Summer is a very hot season in the year. We can go swimming in the swimming pool. That's very interesting. We can also eat ice cream. It's very delicious.

Autumn is a golden season. People in America call it “fall''. Leaves and grass all turn yellow. And some of us like to fy kites in this season because it's always windy.

Winter is usually cold. It is usually windy and cloudy. There are some places in China where it snows. When it snows, we can throw snowballs and make snowmen with our friends. That's so much fun.

Every season is beautiful. I like them all!

郑紫瑜

广州市荔湾区环翠园小学 六年级

指导老师：洪巧鸣

豆豆：春夏秋冬四个季节你最喜欢哪一个？我们的小作者每一个都喜欢呢！文章描写了四个季节各自的特点和每个季节有趣的户外活动，一个个欢乐的画面跃然纸上。文中使用了“总—分—总”的写作结构，使文章结构严谨，又面面俱到，同学们在写作中可以借鉴。

My Bedroom

Welcome to my house! This is my bedroom. I study and sleep here.

The wall in my room is blue. There is a picture of my family on the wall. There is a desk against the wall by the window. It's pink. There is a lamp（台灯）and a book on the desk. The chair is under the desk. There are some beautiful fowers on the window. They're red. There is a bookshelf on the left of the desk. There are many books. I like doing some reading after doing my homework. There are three trophy cups（奖杯）from dancing competitions（比赛）on the top of the bookshelf. I like dancing very much. The bed is on the right, next to the desk. It's purple, green and yellow.

Do you like my bedroom? I like it very much.

黄子琪

广州市白云区三元里小学 四年级

指导老师：潘玉桂

豆豆：在这篇作文中小作者熟练地运用表示方位的介词，准确地介绍房间的空间结构，再加上精心绘制的图画，让大家一目了然。参观她整洁又漂亮的房间真是一种享受呢！

I Have a Cat

Hello, my name is Wen Zhiying. I have a cat. It's very cute.

My cat's name is Mimi. She's hairy（多毛的）. Her hair is brown and white. She has a round face. The two eyes are brown and very sharp（敏锐的）. She has two pointy（尖的）ears, too. They look like triangles（三角形）. Her nose and mouth are small. There are some long whiskers（胡须）beside the mouth. The whiskers help her catch the mice. Her nose has a keen（敏捷的）sense of smell. Mimi has a long tail, and it shakes a lot. She has four claws（爪子）. They're very sharp. Mimi likes cleaning her body with her tongue. She likes sleeping in the daytime and working at night. Mimi is good at climbing up and down. Sometimes she is at the top of the house, and sometimes she is on a tree. Mimi likes sleeping with me.

I love my cat, and my cat loves me too.

温志颖

广州市白云区三元里小学 四年级

指导老师：潘玉桂

豆豆：这篇描写猫咪的文章同样采用了“总—分—总”的结构。开头指出猫咪最大的特点——可爱，接下来从猫的各个部位和习性来阐述这一点，最后进行总结和升华。其中对猫咪的刻画很细致，仿佛它就在我们眼前慵懒地舔着自己的毛发呢！

“豆豆有话说”「不限主题作品征稿」模式正在火热进行中。你的作品可以是作文、绘画、照片……写你想写的，画你想画的，拍你想拍的！这里是你的地盘，所以我们都“看”你的！如果是绘画作品和照片，还需要同学们用一两句英语简单描述自己的作品所呈现的内容。

经“过五关斩六将”后，最后入选的优秀小作者们将得到稿酬奖励和赠刊一本哟！大家还在等什么，赶紧开动脑筋来给我们投稿吧！

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