中学生是否需要军训

新人校高一新生既兴奋又紧张，开始高中生活让许多同学兴奋不已，但开学之初的军训却又让许多同学感到紧张。有的同学认为军训能锻炼意志，对紧张的高中生活有帮助；但有的同学却认为军训是多余的，浪费时间。请听听同学们的呼声，另外，你又是怎么看呢？

When go to high school，the first thing for eyery student is to join in military training.Many students hold the view that it should be abolished.

First of all，military training always lasts for half a month，which can't effectively improve students' physical quality.Besides，the intensity of military training is higher than stu dents' daily exercise，so it will result in many serious problems.For example，some students burn their skin，some feel uncomfortable，and some even injure.What's worse，there may appear some unexpected conflicts between teachers，students and military officers.If schools can't find a proper way to deal with all these problems in time，to abolish the military training is necessary.

In my opinion，military training shouldn't be abolished.First，there are many different kinds of group activitiesin military training，which every student plays an equalimportant role and may influence the whole performance.Therefore，students would realize how important thel teamwork is.Second，compared with ordinary exercise，military training is of a higher intensity for most students.In this training，a strong willpower will be needed andstudents' body would be built gradually.Third，when facing a new class and a new school，students might feel a bit nervous and strange.They can become familiar with each other more quickly by military training.

All in all，military training can benefit from students a lot.It is an important experience in one's life.

本篇文章的话题是目前每一个进入高中学生面临的一门课程，每一位同学都有自己的考虑和想法，因此，同学们有话可写。文章围绕是否需要军训还是取消的话题展开，各抒己见，论据充分、层次清楚。文童选择了一些高级词汇，如：abolish，intensity，result in，conflict，play an important role in，willpower等。承接词汇恰如其分，如：first of all，besides，for example，what's worse，in one's opinion，first，second，third，therefore，all in all等。句式的变化与复杂性也是文章的一大亮点，如：that引导同位语从句；which引导定语从句；compared with...过去分词短语作状语及when facing...状语从句的省略；be of+名词固定句式等。文章中也有一些小错误，同时一些句式还可以再完善。总体来讲，这算是一篇高大上的习作。

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When going to high school，the first thing for every student is to join in military training.Many students hold the view that it should be abolished.First of all，military training always lasts for about half a month，which can't effectively improve students' physical quality.Besides，the intensity of military training is relatively higher than that of students' daily exercise，resulting in many serious problems.For example，some students burn their skin，some feel uncomfortable，and some are even injured.What's worse，there may appear some unexpected conflicts between teachers，students and military officers.If schools can't find a proper way to deal with all these problems in time，to abolish the military training is necessary.

But as far as I'm concerned，military training is vital. First，there are many different kinds of group activities in military training，in which every student plays an equal important role and may influence the whole performance.Therefore，students would realize how important the teamwork is.Second，compared with ordinary exercise，military training is of a higher intensity for most students.To overcome every difficulty in this training，a strong willpower will be needed and students' body would be built up gradually as well.Third， when facing a new class and a new school，students might feel a bit nervous and strange.Group activities in military training can help them get familiar with each other much more quickly.

All in all，military training can benefit students a lot.It is an important experience in one's life.