My Favorite Season

孙铭锐

Some people like spring， because spring is warm. Some people like summer， because in summer people can eat ice-cream. Some people like fall， because its cool in fall. But my favorite season is winter.

Some people say the darkness is too long in winter， but the daylight is too short. But I think it is interesting in winter. In winter we can make snowman， play with snow， ski and eat bingtanghulu. We can spend New Years Day in winter. We put the coin in some dumplings. People are happy to eat this kind of dumplings.

Winter gives us lots of fun. I like winter best. I hope you will like winter， too.

简评：

本文分为三段，布局清楚；小作者围绕自己最喜爱的季节——冬季展开写作，中心突出；内容丰富。文中谈到了在饺子里放硬币的这个细节，体现了中华民族的文化及习俗；用词较为准确，这是一篇比较成功的习作。

指导教师：孟天贺