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2015年高考英语书面表达猜想:“李华”今年会干啥事?

2015-05-25刘本龙

求学·理科版 2015年5期
关键词:李华连贯词数

刘本龙,杭州市学科带头人,对高考有深入研究。在《中小学英语教学与研究》《英语世界》《疯狂英语》《英语周报》等省级和国家级报刊上发表文章300多篇,参与编写英语教辅资料书8本。

书面表达作为高考试卷中的主观性试题,其分值占全卷的1/6到1/5,历年来备受广大考生关注。书面表达主要考些什么?笔者分析了近三年全国各省、直辖市的高考书面表达题,归纳出常考的十类话题。

一、近三年高考书面表达内容的主要类型统计表

从表格可以看出,高考书面表达的内容贴近考生实际生活,写作话题真实,让考生有内容可写,也给考生留下了一定的发挥空间。话题的熟悉度和相对的开放性使各层次考生均能发挥自己的写作水平,展示其语言运用能力。2014年有两道书面表达题要求考生利用想象力和创造力完成,符合实施素质教育,培养考生创新能力的要求。

二、书面表达备考建议

1. 了解近三年全国各地高考书面表达所涉及的内容和体裁,把握高考动向,做到心中有数,考试不慌张。

2. 根据每年高考作文不同的题材和题型,选几篇相应的范文,大量反复阅读这些范文,总结其行文模式和基本句型。对常用的行文规范和基本句型要烂熟于心,并灵活地运用到作文练习中,提高写作水平。

3. 每周进行两篇限时作文训练,对照老师给出的书面表达的范文,看看自己文章中的要点是否齐全,结构是否完整,时态是否正确,衔接是否连贯,等等,不断修改,写作能力就会不断提升。

4. 翻看以前写的作文,找出问题,并分析问题的原因,这样可以避免在高考中犯同样的错误。

三、2015年书面表达题猜想

1.生活哲理类

昨天为了庆祝母亲节,高二(3)班开展了以“感恩父母”为主题的班会活动(自制礼物、给父母写信、“感动父母”金点子比赛等)。假如你是校英语报记者李华,请按下列要点用英语写一则100~120词的新闻报道。标题已给出,不计入总词数。

注意:(1)时间、地点、活动宗旨、活动等内容;

(2)同学们的表现;

(3)对本次活动的感想或评论。

范文:

Students of Class 3 Grade 2 held a class meeting in the classroom to celebrate Mother's Day yesterday, the theme of which is “expressing thanks to our parents.” Apart from making gifts by themselves, students wrote letters to their parents and organized a competition in which the one who came up with the best way to move his or her parents would win.

Students made gifts and wrote letters with concentrated attention. Some even did theses things with tears in theirs eyes. Besides, a great many good ideas were put forward to help their parents.

This wonderful activity gives us teenagers a great opportunity to learn to care about our parents. From the activity, we learn that it's time for us to do something for our parents in return for their great love.

2.校园学习和生活类

最近,关于高考改革,有的地方出台了关于降低高考英语总分的决定。你认为降低高考英语总分有必要吗?请简要阐述你的观点,并说明你的理由。

要求:词数120左右。

范文:

Recently, the reform of the college entrance exam has been carried out in many provinces, some of which announced that they would decrease the scores of English exam, causing a heated discussion in public.

From my point of view, it is an inevitable tendency that we should focus more on Chinese rather than English. Thus, I believe it is necessary to decrease the scores of English exam. For one thing, as Chinese, we must spend more time in learning our mother tongue as well as Chinese traditional culture. For another thing, there is an obvious difference between the English education between cities and villages. Decreasing the scores of English exam can show the further equality of the college entrance exam.

To sum up, we are looking forward to a more reasonable and fair way of selecting out the talents.

3. 社会热点类

一则关于温州市区某小区的住户们花26万元买来“高音炮”对抗广场舞音乐的消息在网上广为流传。假如你是高中生李华,你也是广场舞噪音污染的受害者,请写一封投诉信给相关部门,反应此问题。信的内容应包括以下几点:

(1)广场舞噪音污染现状;

(2)广场舞噪音污染带来的危害;

(3)提出合理化建议或解决方案。

要求:词数120左右。

范文:

Dear Sir,

I am writing the letter to complain about the noise pollution from the square dancing in our district. Every day, various teams of middle-aged and old people come to the square for dancing, with the loud music on all day long. The people living nearby can hardly stand it.

The noise pollution from the square dancing has a bad influence on our life. It is known to us all that the noise pollution may cause great harm to peoples hearing. Whats worse, when we want to go to sleep in the evening, we will surely be disturbed by the loud noise, which can have bad effects on our work and study the next day, especially for the students who will take part in the college entrance examination just like me. Therefore, I do hope the problem can be solved soon.

From my point of view, the government should make some rules about the noise pollution and punish the noise makers. For the people who want to dance, they may be allowed to dance in a certain place in a certain time. I will appreciate it very much if you will consider my suggestions.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

4. 学生活动类

2014年12月31日,新华中学在校音乐厅举办了迎新晚会。在晚会上全校师生同台演出,例如唱歌、跳舞、演小品、变魔术等,最后齐唱歌曲《明天会更好》。假如你是校英语报记者李华,请按下列要点用英语写一则120~150词的新闻报道。

(1)时间、地点、人物、活动;

(2)师生们的反应;

(3)对事件进行评论。

参考词汇:小品witty skits 魔术magic tricks

范文:

On the evening of December 31, 2010, the party to celebrate the New Year was held in the Concert Hall of XinHua High School. Working together on the stage, the teachers and students presented us with a lot of wonderful and interesting performances. For example, they cooperated with each other to perform witty skits as well as singing and dancing. They also played magic tricks, which came as a surprise. What amazing programs! All the evening the audience couldnt help laughing!

At the end of the party, all the performers sang the song “tomorrow will be better”. All the people present at the party thought highly of it ,saying that they would never forget it.

The New Year party is a great success. Undoubtedly, the party conveys us the message that this is a whole brand new year.

5.想象创新类

每个人都希望拥有一所温馨、舒适的房子。你想拥有什么样的房子呢?请用英语描述你梦想中的房子。

注意:词数120左右。

可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

范文:

My dream house is a villa which lies on the coast. There are two yards in the villa. The front yard is a garden with many beautiful flowers and plants for the four seasons. There is a swimming pool in the back yard, as my family are fond of swimming. On the first floor, there is a big hall when you enter the gate.

On the right of the hall is a sitting room where we can relax, have a rest, watch TV and enjoy entertainments. On the left there is a computer room and a study belonging to me. The villa will be equipped with the modern equipment, such as security alarms controlled by computers, vision phones, automatic doors. That house is what I dream.

6.环保类

今年以来,我国东部多地出现持续雾霾天气(smog),极大地影响了人们的健康与生活。请根据提示,写一篇文章。

(1)描述目前的雾霾现象及其危害;

(2)分析雾霾形成的原因;

(3)提出至少两条治理雾霾天气的建议。

注意:上下文连贯,行文流畅;词数120左右。

范文:

Recently, the smog has occurred continually in most parts of East China, which has done great harm to peoples daily life. A large number of traffic accidents happen on account of the heavy smog weather and quite a lot of flights have to be put off. Besides, more and more people become ill because of the poisonous air caused by the smog.

What leads to the smog whether? For on thing, the various pollutions especially the air pollution caused by the factories and cars should be to blame. For another thing, the earth is becoming warmer and warmer due to humans activities such as cutting down trees and putting more carbon dioxide.

Its time we should realize the importance of protecting the environment and take some measures to reduce the smog weather. The government should make some laws to protect the environment. Everyone should be encouraged to go to work or school with the public traffic instead of private cars, such as the bus and the underground. Together, individuals can make a difference.

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