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做到语言简洁，不重复，能随情景内容的变化写出句式多样的语句。新课程标准中写作的评价标准，强调了语言表达的能力：语言结构和词汇要丰富。因此，在确保行文准确流畅的前提下，需要文字清新简洁，语句灵活多变，使文章的语言结构更加丰富多彩。我们可以采用以下几种方式：

1. 合理利用介词或名词代替动词，能有效降低句子的复杂性，在令句子通顺自然的同时，也能减少语法错误。试体会下面黑体部分被括号内词语替代后的效果。

（1） The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom， a bathroom， and a kitchen. （with）

（2） I was pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something that has taken place in our school. （about）

（3） I have a surprise to give you. （for）

2. 使用短语结构来简化从句或合并短句。常见的结构有介词短语、名词短语、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、同位语等结构。

（1） The young man pointed to a policeman not far away and said，“He stopped us an hour ago and told us to catch the offender”.

修改意见：Pointing to a policeman not far away， the young man explained， “He stopped us an hour ago and told us to catch the offender.”

（2） My brother was riding the bike and I sat on the seat behind him.

修改意见：My brother was riding the bike with me sitting on the seat behin.

3. 通过合句，将意义相关的几个句子，用一定的连接方式连接起来，或通过紧缩，去掉一些多余的成分可以避免冗长累赘，松散无力，使句子凝炼，层次清晰。

（1） I was walking along Park Road towards the east. At that time， an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.

修改意见：I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.

（2） The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.

修改意见：The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street， which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.

（3） I can follow my own interests. I can read books， visit museums and take computer lessons.

修改意见：I can follow my own interests. Such as reading books， visiting museums and taking computer lesson

4. 尝试改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等，这样能增加文章的节奏和韵律美。

（1） We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.

修改意见：Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.

（2） We had to stand there to catch the offender.

修改意见：What we had to do was stand there to catch the offender.

（3） Our brave Ah Fu had saved my little sister.

修改意见：It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister.

新标准对写作的要求，增加了情感因素，在准确流畅表达写作要点的同时，适当增加句子的感情色彩，增加一些人情味，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。如：

（1） Do you think youll like it？ If not， I can try and find another flat for you.（表现了作者对朋友尽职尽责的心情，回信由此充满浓厚的感情色彩）

（2） As far as I know， everyone is happy about the arrangement of things.（表现了作者对减负后喜悦的心情）

（3） I hope you can come to China to watch the Olympic Games in 2008. Then Ill be very happy to be your guide.

（表现了作者对朋友的深厚的友谊）缤 纷 世 界Bin Fen Shi Jie缤 纷 世 界Bin Fen Shi Jie

BEIJINGThe National Peoples Congress （NPC）， Chinas top legislature， concluded its annual session Wednesday morning.

“The session was successful， with the further accumulation of common understanding，clarification of goals and reinforcement of confidence，” said Wu Bangguo， chairman of the NPC Standing Committee， in a speech delivered at the sessions closing meeting.

The session resulted in a full representation of the will of the people and the main concepts oft he Communist Party of China （CPC）， he said.

NPC deputies， with a strong sense of responsibility and commitment to their mission， exercised their duties as entrusted by the Constitution and law， he said.

At the session， the NPC adopted a number of important documents， including the governments work report， central budget and national economic and social development plan for 2012.

While deliberating the governments work report， deputies agreed that the country made progress in economic， political， cultural， social and environmental arenas in 2011， making for agood beginning for the 12th FiveYear Plan period （20112015）， Wu said.

This year will be an important year for China， as the 18th CPC National Congress will be heldlater this year， Wu said.

The NPC will work for the steady growth and stability of the country as it welcomes the 18th CPCNational Congress， he said.

The NPC also adopted several decisions on deputy elections for the 12th NPC and methods fort he election of deputies to the 12th NPC from Hong Kong and Macao special administrative regions， as well as work reports for the NPC Standing Committee， the Supreme Peoples Court and the Supreme Peoples Procuratorate.

This year， the country will carry out elections for deputies to the next NPC using the same ratio for rural and urban areas for the first time， Wu said.

He pledged to ensure stable and orderly elections in line with relevant laws.

At the closing meeting， lawmakers adopted an amendment to the Criminal Procedure Law.

The revision embodies the constitutional principle of respecting and protecting human rights and is a key improvement to the current legal system of criminal prosecution and litigation， Wu said.

The NPC will work to educate the public about the revised law and prepare for its implementation， he said.

Since this year marks the last session of the 11th NPC， Wu said the NPC will learn from the experience gained in previous years and improve the quality of its work， he said.

Top CPC and state leaders Hu Jintao， Wen Jiabao， Jia Qinglin， Li Changchun， Xi Jinping， LiKeqiang， He Guoqiang and Zhou Yongkang attended the closing meeting.

Less than half of the free umbrellas taken by commuters on rainy days as part of a Shanghai Metro project have been returned， according to the citys transport agency.

Passengers have been able to borrow the“Umbrellas for Love”since 2008， with all 280 stations initially issued with a stock of 100.

However， as the city is enduring daily deluges， staff at some stations say their stocks have run dry.

At South Huangpi Road Station on Monday， a sign stated that all umbrellas had been loaned out. A passing service center worker said：“Nobody gives them back.”

An employee at Lujiabang Road station gave the same answer， saying they were waiting for anew batch to arrive.

“Due to public demand and the high rate at which the umbrellas disappear， we have had to distribute extra batches at least three times over the past few years，” said Fan Wenjun， a media officer at Shanghai Metro operation management center.

Data provided by the center showed that of the 88，000 umbrellas allocated to stations， less than half are still in circulation. The return rate was 47.5 percent for the entire metro network in February.

Passengers can borrow an umbrella after writing down their name and phone number at the service center. Usually passengers will be reminded to return the umbrellas within a week to where they were borrowed. Each umbrella is numbered and belongs to a specific station.

“But we dont require passengers to show their IDs or verify their contact information. These umbrellas are loaned out of love. We hope people can cooperate with us，” said a subway worker at Lujiabang Road Station.

A metro employee surnamed Fan at Peoples Square Station， the busiest in the city， estimated that at least half of passengers give false information， which they discover when they call to remind them to return the umbrella.

China Daily talked to eight Shanghai residents. All said they would return the umbrellas.

“The large Shanghai Metro logos and the sloganUmbrellas for Lovewhich is emblazoned on them， makes it obvious that they may have been stolen，” said Wang Qi， a 53yearold house wife. “People would have to have some nerve to hold on to them in streets.”