基础写作的写作技巧与常用句式

马小娟

一、五个写作技巧

1. 写作前将要点整合成5句话,注意不要遗漏要点。

2. 结合表达内容,选择自己熟悉的词汇和句型,因为用正确的句子来表达是得分的关键。

3. 基础好的同学,在有把握的情况下,可以尽量运用高级的表达方式。如用强调句、感叹句、主从复合句、非谓语动词短语、with的复合结构等多种句式结构来增添文采,提高得分的档次。

4. 恰当地使用过渡性词语,增强行文的逻辑性和连贯性。

5. 书写时不要将e和t、a和u、r和v、y和g、w和m这五对字母写混淆。要注意书写工整并保持卷面整洁,以提高印象分。

二、十种常用句式

1. 祈使句。

Now please allow me to introduce you some of our school rules here. 现在请允许我给您介绍一些学校规则。

2. 感叹句。

What terrible weather were having! 现在的天气真糟糕!

How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well! 看到庄稼和蔬菜长势良好,我们是多么地高兴!

3. 倒装句。

Only in this way can animals live a real happy and quiet life.只有采取这种方式,动物才可以过着快乐、平静的生活。

4. It作形式主语或宾语。

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. 众所周知,一些学生在学校考试中作弊。

I find it necessary to learn English well. 我觉得有必要学好英语。

5. 并列句。

并列结构是用并列连词把两个或两个以上的、具有逻辑关系的简单句连为一体,常见的并列连词有but, yet, and, however, for, therefore, so, or, when, while, not only... but also...等。

All the passengers were smilingandthe sun was shining. 旅客在微笑,太阳在照耀。

I was walking along Park Road towards the eastwhenan elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. 我正沿着公园路向东走,这时一位老人从街对面的公园走出来。

6. 主从复合句。

主从复合句是指含名词性从句、状语从句或定语从句的复合句。

He pointed outthatthe causes for short-sightedness are so complicatedthatno medicine can cure short-sightedness. 他也指出近视的原因非常复杂,没有药可治愈。

7. It is...that... 强调结构。

It was not untilat the end of 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. 射击最初只是生存工具,直到19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。

8. 非谓语动词短语。

Well mostly stay at home in the eveningwatching TV, playing games and meeting friends.晚上我们主要呆在家里看电视,打游戏和会友。

9. with的复合结构。

With the society developing very fast, its quite necessary that we (should) have a good knowledge of English and computer. 随着社会的快速发展,我们有必要精通英语和电脑。

10. there be结构。

If I were one of these animals, there is no doubt that I would refuse to meet visitors.如果我是动物,毫无疑问,我不会会见游客。

三、常见的过渡词语

1. 表示转折观点的有but, however, while, nevertheless, on the contrary等。

2. 表示并列关系的有at the same time, in the meanwhile, in addition, apart from that, on the other hand等。

3. 表示递进关系的有besides, whats more, whats worse, to make the matter worse, worse still/worse than all, worse than ever, not to mention it等。

4. 表示个人观点的有in my opinion, in my view, personally, I think..., in my point of view, as far as I know, as far as Im concerned, from a different/practical view等。

四、写作案例分享

最近广州市通过法规禁止乞丐在地下人行道行乞留宿。上周一你班就此事进行了讨论。讨论情况如下:

[写作内容]请将以上的讨论情况写成一篇短文,内容包括:

1. 讨论的起因及时间;

2. 支持的比率及理由;

3. 反对的比率及理由;

4. 你的看法。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯。

参考范文

Recently, Guangzhou passed a law to ban beggars from begging and sleeping in the subwaysandour class had a discussion about it last Monday. 56% of the students dont agree with the idea because they think somebeggarsreally have difficulty in making a living and some of them have to play music in the subways to survive.However, 44% of the students favour the idea because they think beggars make a lot of trouble for the city.Whats more, some beggars are just taking advantage of peoples compassion to make easy money.Personally, I thinkit is a good idea to forbid beggars in public places and instead we should take some measures to help them.

五、写作演练

假设你是李华,刚从国外回来,发现我市发生了巨大的变化。请你根据下列提示,用英语给你在美国的朋友Jack发一个e-mail,告诉他这里的变化。

1. 兴建了许多高速公路,交通便利。

2. 高楼林立,人们的住房条件改善。

3. 新建了许多体育馆和公园,人们有许多活动场所。

4. 人们生活水平提高,许多家庭有了私家车。

[写作要求]

1. 必须用5个句子表达全部的内容;

2. 开头、结尾已给出,不计入句数内。

Dear Jacky,

Our city has changed a lot in the past few years. ...

...

Best wishes to you!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

参考范文

Dear Jacky,

Our city has changed a lot in the past few years. More high ways have been built, which makes it very convenient for people to travel. People have better housing conditions now, for many high buildings have appeared. With many newly-built gymnasiums and parks, more and more people have a place to enjoy themselves by doing sports or other leisure activities. Besides, peoples living conditions have been greatly improved and many families have their own cars. People are living a happy life now in our city.

Best wishes to you!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

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